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The sound of split wooden frames, shattered glass windows, and fractured
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brownstone woke her. [...] It was only moments before her wind-chime alarm,
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before Mami handed her a cup of coffee and Papi looked on at her, so very
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proud. She left their apartment, ready. Today – the biggest day, the day that
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would set everything in motion.
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Luz walked out into Nothar Park, where she watched a wrecking ball
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swing back and forth from a crane. She picked up part of a brick that had
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skittered out to the sidewalk, noting how close to her own skin tone it was, a
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color Eusebia, her mother, called casi puro cafecito. Hardly any milk there, she
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always said, with an edge of concern, finding it impossible to simply use the
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word Black. The crane's neck moved, and the metal rope swung the ball
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forward, striking again. The noise grew noticeably louder. The wall resisted.
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But the force of the pressure caused a crater where it hit, and from it, tiny lines
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extended like wrinkles.
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This the sound that woke her.
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The cold air was thick with mist. Luz turned away from the noise and
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rubble, making her way through Nothar Park toward the subway, intent on her
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destination and determined not to be distracted. Her boss, Raenna, had texted
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her late last night
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I got news to share, she wrote. Meet me at TSP before work. [...]
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As Luz reached the stairs down to the subway, the escalating noise made
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her pause. The wrecking ball had finally broken through the stubborn wall –
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the fracturing now complete. Dust rose into the damp air rapidly, then hung
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softly above the trees.
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Was Luz upset to witness the beginning of the destruction of her
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neighborhood? Nope. Qué va. She was focused on a rare moment of elation.
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Would today be the day she'd be offered junior partner? Of course it would.
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Over the last five years, she and her boss had had an agreement. The minute
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the promotion was a go, she'd be the first to know. She pushed forward.
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Although Luz wasn't upset about the crashing wall, she did worry about
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her mother. Eusebia often looked onto that old, burnt-out tenement building
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and spoke about maybe putting together a community campaign to purchase
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the grounds – for a garden, no less. Luz and her father, Vladimir, remained
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mute to Mami's inquiries, hiding conspiring smiles behind cupped palms. They
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both knew how hard it would be, to pull that off. The obscene asking price for
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the shell - over ten million dollars. They thought it would remain as it had –
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abandoned, neglected, unwanted since they arrived from the Dominican
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Republic twenty years ago. Who would bother?
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Plus. Vladimir had cashed out his retirement investments, and Luz had
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contributed all her savings from the bonuses she'd gotten over the years, all to
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build Mami's dream home back in the Dominican Republic. Mami remained
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oblivious to their secret scheming. [...] In just a few months, the house would
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be completed, her parents would retire and move back, and Luz would finally
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be able to live her own life. Move to Central Park West, that corner building on
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Seventy-ninth Street she'd had her eye on since she graduated law school.
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It was ironic, really, that now that she was so close to finally leaving the
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neighborhood, change had reached it instead. A miracle it had taken this long
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for the gentrification of New York to reach Nothar Park. The Lower East Side,
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Chelsea, Hell's Kitchen, Harlem, Washington Heights, and especially
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Brooklyn, washed out, white out, everything forever changed. At the firm
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where she practiced law as a junior associate, she had friends who'd moved
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into those same neighborhoods, awed at how amazing the space (actual
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space!) was - friends who just a few years back would have been too scared
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to walk down the street they now lived on. She knew what would happen when
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the neighborhood changed. Some of it good, some of it not good. Now here
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they were, at the cusp. Belowground, the turbulence of the train entering the
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station prompted her to hurry on. She put the neighborhood out of her mind.
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Her future life was waiting.
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The Secret Place, a members-only restaurant in midtown Manhattan,
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wasn't listed in any online apps, didn't accept reservations. As she waited for
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Raenna to arrive, Luz noticed the dining room space as if for the first time.
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Every wall painted black, including the tall ceiling. The vases, in contrast, had
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an ombré gold tint and were filled with oversized tree branches sprouting
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yellow flowers. They enhanced Luz's feeling of pure light. She held fast to the
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edge of the table lest she float away. [...]
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She had often felt out of place. Just a few nights ago, at dinner with
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colleagues, they'd been served eel in a reduction of lime that made the flesh
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writhe. Nodding along with everyone else, she'd said it was delicious, while
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worrying that others could sense her growing discomfort and nausea. But not
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today.
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[...]
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She stood and went to the bathroom.
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Looking in the mirror, she applied another coat of lipstick. She fixed a
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strand that had escaped her tight bun, pushed the pinchos further in place –
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wincing at how tight the hairpins were, how much they hurt. It was worth the
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pain. She practiced how she would stand in front of her peers when they made
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the announcement later - each associate would clap, while drilling her with
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their eyes, especially those who'd been waiting to hear it was their turn.
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In the dimness of the bathroom, a familiar sadness neared at the thought
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of all the hours, all the work, all the sacrifice, her hand first up to volunteer on
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extra cases – spending every weekend in the office, getting home later and
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later every day. Not now, she thought, pushing that sadness away. Today, it
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insisted. In the mirror, on her face, the outline of that emptiness. Where did it
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come from?
From: Cleyvis Natera, Neruda on the Park, 2022 (abridged).
Text comprehension and analysis
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Outline what the text reveals about Luz's parents.
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Analyse the ways in which changes in Luz's neighbourhood as well as in her personal life are presented and how she feels about them, taking into account three examples of how language is used.
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Composition
Choose one of the following topics and write a coherent text laying out your ideas.
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Megacities foreshadow the idea of a global identity.
Discuss.
Discuss.
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"Change will not come if we wait for some other person or some other time. We are the ones we've been waiting for. We are the change that we seek." (Barack Obama)
Comment on this statement.
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Describe briefly, analyse and comment on the cartoon.
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Facing Modern Global Challenges
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Text comprehension and analysis
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- Luz’s parents, Eusebia and Vladimir, are supportive and proud of their daughter’s achievements, as seen in their morning ritual with Mami giving her coffee and Papi beaming with pride.
- Eusebia feels deeply connected to the neighborhood and dreams of creating a community garden on the abandoned land, reflecting her desire to preserve and improve her surroundings rather than passively accepting change.
- Eusebia avoids directly calling Luz 'Black,' reflecting potentially conservative views shaped by cultural or generational differences.
- Vladimir has cashed out his retirement investments, and Luz has contributed her savings to fulfill Eusebia’s dream of building a home in the Dominican Republic.
- Luz’s parents plan to retire and move back to the Dominican Republic, which shows their deep-rooted connection to their homeland and their wish to eventually return to their cultural origins.
- Both Vladimir and Luz believe it’s unlikely they could secure the land for Eusebia’s community garden due to its high price, reflecting their realistic perspective on the effects of gentrification
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In the passage, the changes in Luz's neighborhood and her personal life are deeply connected. They reflect broader themes such as global changes, cultural displacement and personal dreams. The changes in her neighborhood mirror her inner conflicts as she faces the tension between loyalty to her roots and her desire for a wealthier and more independent life. Through descriptive language, metaphor and irony, the text reveals Luz's complex feelings towards these changes.
Introduction
- Gentrification and Displacement
The gentrification of Luz’s neighborhood is symbolized by the "wrecking ball" that shatters walls, suggesting the destruction of history and the arrival of modern development (l. 7).
Luz observes the destruction with indifference, emphasizing her detachment from the community's struggles: "Was Luz upset to witness the beginning of the destruction of her neighborhood? Nope" (l. 26-27).
The use of words like “fracturing” and “dust” (l. 23-24) emphasizes a sense of loss, masked by Luz’s outward indifference.
- Irony of Timing
The narrator points out the irony that the neighborhood is transforming just as Luz prepares to leave. (l. 47)
This irony highlights her mixed emotions; although she recognizes the effects of gentrification, her primary focus is on her own success.
The phrase “a miracle it had taken this long” (l. 48) subtly critiques the inevitability of gentrification, hinting at Luz’s awareness of how it has impacted other neighborhoods.
- Symbolism of Community Spaces
Eusebia’s dream of establishing a community garden symbolizes her resistance to urbanization and her commitment to preserving cultural heritage (l. 33).
Luz and her father’s amused reaction to this idea — hiding “conspiring smiles” (l. 34) — reflects their detachment from her mother’s values and their skepticism about her ambitions.
The garden serves as a metaphor for community and roots, contrasting with Luz’s desire for personal advancement.
Presentation of Neighborhood Changes
- Career Aspirations and Sacrifice
Luz’s anticipation of a promotion reflects her ambition and the sacrifices she’s made. Her excitement about this potential change is described as a “rare moment of elation” (l. 27).
Her focus on this pivotal day as “the day that would set everything in motion” (l. 5) underscores her determination to succeed, but it also hints at a distance from her heritage and family values.
Her ambitions contrast with her mother’s community focus, illustrating a generational shift in priorities.
- Feeling Out of Place
Luz's unease in elite spaces, such as "The Secret Place" underscores her persistent sense of displacement. (l. 60).
She describes herself as feeling a “pure light” (l. 64) in this setting, which is both uplifting and isolating, symbolizing her gradual detachment from her roots.
Her physical actions, like tightening her hairpins “despite the pain” (l. 76) emphasize the sacrifices she makes to conform in these elite spaces.
- Inner Conflict and Lingering Sadness
In a quiet moment in the mirror, Luz confronts an “outline of that emptiness” on her face (l. 84), revealing her inner conflict about the sacrifices she has made.
The language here suggests that her ambitions have left a void, hinting at an underlying regret or sense of loss as she distances herself from her heritage.
This moment of reflection underscores her struggle to reconcile her identity with her career-driven life.
Presentation of Personal Life Changes
Through symbolic language, irony, and metaphor, the text explores the transformations in Luz's neighborhood and personal life. Although Luz is focused on her career advancement, an underlying unease about leaving her roots lingers. Luz’s response to the transformation of her community and her professional journey reflects a broader theme of cultural displacement, illustrating the complex emotions that accompany upward mobility and the erosion of heritage.
Conclusion
Composition
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With the global acceleration of urbanisation, megacities - urban areas with more than 10 million inhabitants - are becoming the focus of discussions about the future of human society. These vibrant, multicultural centres exemplify the fusion of cultures and lifestyles from around the world, promoting a universal urban experience. In this way, megacities can anticipate the emergence of a global identity, a concept that transcends national, cultural and linguistic boundaries. This essay explores how megacities embody a global identity through their diverse demographics, shared social and economic challenges, and globally-influenced culture.
Introduction
- Megacities like New York, Tokyo, and London are renowned for their cultural diversity, housing millions of residents from varied ethnic backgrounds. This multicultural mix fosters a blend of customs, cuisines, and lifestyles, encouraging residents to adopt a cosmopolitan outlook.
- These cities serve as hubs for transnational communities, where individuals retain connections to their home cultures while integrating into new ones, creating a hybrid cultural experience.
- In megacities, English and other major languages become lingua francas, facilitating communication and collaboration among diverse populations and fostering a sense of shared global identity.
Main Body
Diversity and Cultural Integration
Diversity and Cultural Integration
- They are often financial centres connected to global supply chains and home to the headquarters of multinational companies.
- Their economies are closely linked to global markets, emphasising their interdependence with other global cities.
- These cities attract skilled professionals, workers and entrepreneurs from around the world, creating an international workforce that brings global knowledge and innovation to the local economy.
- Economic imbalances, housing crises and urban poverty are common to all megacities. The shared nature of these challenges highlights a universal urban experience and fosters empathy and understanding across borders.
Global Economic Networks
- Megacities face similar environmental challenges such as pollution, climate change and the need for sustainable infrastructure.
- In response, they often share strategies and technologies, creating a sense of collective responsibility for the planet.
- Issues such as inequality, police reform and human rights often find resonance in megacities.
- Movements such as Black Lives Matter, climate strikes and other social issues often reach across cities and national borders, fostering solidarity between city inhabitants worldwide.
Environmental and Social Challenges as Shared Experiences
In conclusion, megacities, with their rich diversity, economic interconnections, and shared challenges, indeed foreshadow the emergence of a global identity. By blending local and global influences, these cities embody a microcosm of what an interconnected world might look like. As they continue to grow, megacities could further reinforce a global identity that transcends national and cultural boundaries, fostering unity, empathy, and shared purpose among humanity. Thus, they offer a powerful glimpse into a future where global identity may become a defining feature of urban—and perhaps human—existence.
Conclusion
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In his statement, “Change will not come if we wait for some other person or some other time. We are the ones we've been waiting for. We are the change that we seek,” Barack Obama calls for personal responsibility in driving societal progress. He urges people to act now instead of waiting for others to lead, a message especially relevant in today’s world of pressing challenges like climate change, inequality, and political division. This essay will explore how Obama’s words highlight personal responsibility, the power of individual action in creating collective change, and the empowerment of individuals to shape the future.
Introduction
- Obama's words emphasize that change begins with each individual.
- Instead of waiting for someone else to solve the problems, the individual is encouraged to take the initiative.
- By declaring, "We are the ones we've been waiting for," Obama instills in individuals a sense of agency and responsibility to shape their future.
- This perspective shifts the focus from dependence on external leaders to personal responsibility and challenges people to believe in their ability to contribute to positive change.
Main Body
The Call for Personal Responsibility
The Call for Personal Responsibility
- When individuals make small changes or take action in their own communities, these efforts combined can lead to significant collective change.
- Major social movements, such as civil rights, environmentalism, and gender equality, often started with the efforts of a few individuals who inspired collective action.
- Obama's words emphasise the potential of individuals to trigger far-reaching action.
The Role of Individual Action in Collective Change
- Global issues like climate change can seem overwhelming, making it easy for individuals to feel that their actions are insignificant.
- Obama’s message encourages individuals to believe that their choices, from reducing waste to advocating for environmental policies, are meaningful.
- Issues such as racial and economic inequality require individual voices and actions. Movements for justice often rely on the participation and bravery of individuals who are willing to challenge unfair systems.
- Obama’s words resonate particularly in democratic societies, where each individual’s vote and civic involvement contribute to shaping a fair and representative government.
- The statement underscores the importance of participating in political processes rather than waiting for change from those already in power.
Facing Modern Global Challenges
Barack Obama’s statement is a powerful call to action, emphasizing that change begins with individuals who take responsibility for their communities and the world. His message encourages people to reject passivity, believe in their ability to make a difference, and embrace their role in collective progress. By understanding that “we are the change that we seek,” individuals are inspired to act, both in their local communities and in broader societal efforts. In today’s complex world, Obama’s words remind us that meaningful change often starts from within, calling each person to rise to the challenges of our time with confidence and commitment.
Conclusion
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This cartoon illustrates a scene in which a large barrel labeled "BIG CITIES" is shown with various people and groups parachuting away from it. The city on top of the barrel is about to explode, as indicated by a lit fuse, symbolizing a dangerous or unstable situation. A speech bubble from within the city asks, “But, why?! Why is everyone leaving?” Through satire, the cartoon underscores the recent exodus of people, businesses, and police from big cities.
Introduction
- The barrel labeled "BIG CITIES" has buildings on top representing an urban area.
- Various groups and individuals, labeled as "Business," "Police," and "Families," are seen parachuting away from the city.
- A lit fuse suggests an impending explosion, signaling a crisis within big cities.
- The speech bubble from the city asking, “But, why?! Why is everyone leaving?” conveys a sense of irony and confusion, as if the city itself is unaware of the problems driving people away.
Main Body
Description of the Scene
Description of the Scene
- The lit fuse and imminent explosion symbolize the growing crises in big cities, possibly representing issues like crime, high costs, or political tensions.
- The cartoon implies that cities have become "ticking time bombs," pushing people to leave for safer, more stable environments.
- Key groups—police, businesses, and families—are shown fleeing the city, indicating that cities are losing essential components of their communities.
- The cartoon suggests that the departure of these groups could lead to further deterioration in safety, economy, and community cohesion.
- The question, “Why is everyone leaving?” is ironic, as it implies the city officials are oblivious to the problems causing the exodus.
Analysis of Themes
- Many people are leaving big cities due to high living expenses, crime, and perceived lack of safety. The cartoon suggests these issues have reached a tipping point.
- The departure of businesses and families suggests that cities are losing economic vitality and social stability, which could lead to further decline.
- The cartoon implies that the migration of key groups will have a lasting impact on city economies and communities.
- It critiques city policies and leadership, highlighting their role in these challenges and suggesting a need for reform or improved governance.
Commentary on Current Issues
The cartoon effectively uses satire and symbolism to comment on the challenges facing big cities today, such as rising crime, high costs, and urban decay. By depicting essential groups fleeing the city, it highlights the long-term consequences of these issues. The cartoon suggests that without addressing these underlying problems, cities may continue to lose their economic and social foundations, potentially leading to further instability. Through its humorous but critical tone, the cartoon encourages reflection on how urban centers can retain their residents and vitality in the face of growing challenges.
Conclusion