Task 1
Working on the text
Do the following tasks, writing coherent texts. Use your own words as far as appropriate.
(28 BE)
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Summarise the article.
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Analyse how the author presents the topic. Refer to structure and language.
Writing
Choose one of the following tasks:
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3.1
Evaluate how the philosophy of minimalism could be put into practice. Write about 350 words.
or
3.2
“In every crisis, doubt or confusion, take the higher path – the path of compassion, courage, understanding and love.” Amit Ray (*1960), Indian author
Comment on the quotation. Write about 350 words.
Comment on the quotation. Write about 350 words.
“The Pitfalls and the Potential of the New Minimalism”
The mantra of “less is more” still obeys a logic of accumulation – but it hints at genuinely different ways of thinking.
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The new literature of minimalism is full of stressful advice. Pack up all your possessions,
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unpack things only as needed, give away everything that’s still packed after a month.
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Or wake up early, pick up every item you own, and consider whether or not it sparks joy.
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See if you can wear just thirty-three items of clothing for three months. Know that it’s possible
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to live abundantly with only a hundred possessions. Don’t organize – purge.
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Digitize your photos. Get rid of the things you bought to impress people. Downsize your apartment.
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Think constantly about what will enable you to live the best life possible.
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Never buy anything on sale.
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Recently, I spent a few months absorbing the new minimalist gospel, beginning with Marie Kondo,
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the celebrity decluttering guru, whose book The Life-Changing Magic of Tidying Up
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has sold more than ten million copies, and whose stance can seem twee but is rooted in
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Shinto tradition: having fewer possessions allows us to care for those possessions as if they
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had souls. I also turned to Joshua Fields Millburn and Ryan Nicodemus, who call themselves
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the Minimalists and, under that name, run a blog, publish books, and host a podcast
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that is downloaded as many as three million times a month. I read the blog Be More with Less,
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which is written by Courtney Carver, who came to minimalism after being given
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a diagnosis of multiple sclerosis and views the practice as a pathway to love
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and self-care. [...]
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As I waded through this I felt like a dirty sponge being irradiated in the microwave: I was
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trapped, unpleasantly, but a cleansing fire was beginning to rage within. I Kondoed my
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sock drawer, tenderly unravelling lumpy balls of wool and cotton and laying each pair flat.
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I made daily pilgrimages to Goodwill. When I went home to Texas for the holidays,
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I entered my parents’ apartment as a whirling dervish of minimalist self-satisfaction,
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hectorig them to toss out their kitchen doodads and excess Tupperware. Within hours of arrival,
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I had filled six large trash bags with clothes to donate. “See?!” I howled, irritating myself
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and everyone around me. “You get rid of the things you don’t need so that you can focus
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on the things you do! ”
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I sounded, I imagine, like many of the converts to what might be considered the latest wave
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in an intermittent American impulse. In 1977, the social scientists Duane Elgin and Arnold
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Mitchell observed that, for several years, “the popular press has paid occasional attention
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to stories of people returning to the simple life.” Elgin and Mitchell believed that this
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smattering of articles reflected a social movement that could bring about a “major transformation
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of traditional American values.” They called the movement “voluntary simplicity” (VS),
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and saw it as a potential solution not only to “growing social malaise” but also to ecological
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destruction and the “unmanageable scale and complexity of institutions.” They believed
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that a few million people were practicing full voluntary simplicity, and that as much as half
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the U.S. population was sympathetic to it. Estimating the “maximum plausible growth of
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VS,” they wrote that as many as a third of all Americans might be converted to the simple
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life by the year 2000.
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That didn’t happen. But, in 2008, the housing crisis and the banking collapse exposed the
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fantasy of easy acquisition as humiliating and destructive; for many people, it became
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newly necessary and desirable to learn to rely on less. It is tempting to interpret the new
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minimalism as a kind of cultural aftershock of that financial disruption, and perhaps it is, in
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part. But, at the same time that Kondo and her cohort have popularized a form of material
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humility, minimalism has become an increasingly aspirational and deluxe way of life. The
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hashtag #minimalism pulls up more than seventeen million photos on Instagram; many of
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the top posts depict high-end interior spaces. Last April, Kim Kardashian West appeared in
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a Vogue video walking through her sixty-million-dollar California mansion, a stark, blank,
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monochromatic palace that she described as a “minimal monastery.” Less is more attractive
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when you’ve got a lot of money, and minimalism is easily transformed from a philosophy
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of intentional restraint into an aesthetic language through which to assert a form of walledoff
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luxury – a self-centered and competitive impulse that is not so different from the
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acquisitive attitude that minimalism purports to reject. It is rarely acknowledged, by either
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the life-hack-minded authors or the proponents of minimalist design, that many people
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have minimalism forced upon them by circumstances that render impossible a serene,
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jewel-box life style. Nor do they mention that poverty and trauma can make frivolous pos-
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sessions seem like a lifeline rather than a burden. Many of today’s gurus maintain that
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minimalism can be useful no matter one’s income, but the audience they target is implicitly
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affluent – the pitch is never about making do with less because you have no choice. Millburn
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and Nicodemus frequently describe their past lives as spiritually empty twentysomethings
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with six-figure incomes. McKeown pitches his insights at people who have a surplus of
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options as a consequence of success. Kondo recently launched an online store, suggesting
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that the left hand might declutter while the right hand buys a seventy-five-dollar rose-quartz
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tuning fork. Today’s minimalism, with its focus on self-improvement, feels oddly dominated
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by a logic of accumulation. Less is always more, or “more, more, more,” as Millburn
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and Nicodemus write: “more time, more passion, more experiences, more growth, more
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contribution, more contentment – and more freedom.” [...]
Source: Tolentino, Jia, The pitfalls and the potential of the new minimalism , The New Yorker 03.02.2020,
https://www.newyorker.com
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Our solutions are listed in key points. In the examination, full marks can only be achieved by writing a continuous text.
Our solutions are listed in key points. In the examination, full marks can only be achieved by writing a continuous text.
1.
Jia Tolentino's article "The Pitfalls and the Potential of the New Minimalism" was published on www.newyorker.com in 2020.
Introductory sentence:
reference to article
reference to article
- initially, advice on how to live a more minimalist life is listed
- mention of various minimalists of today
thus showing their expertise on the subject
- Marie Kondo, for example, is one of these minimalists who says that if you have less in your possession, you can appreciate these objects more as if they have a soul
Main Part:
advice and famous minimalists
advice and famous minimalists
- fanatical decluttering of her own home
- Tolentino states that minimalism has been around since the 1970s and is not a temporary phenomenon
- in the 1970s, there was a "voluntary simplicity" movement, in which it was hoped that by 2000 third of Americans would live with less and thus reduce social tensions and environmental destruction
the author's peronal experience
movement
movement
- in the second half of the article, Tolentino addresses the contrasts between the forced minimalism of the poor and minimalism as a sign of success and wealth
- minimalism is currently popular and fashionable among the super-rich
- ultimately, she shows how minimalism today is linked to the accumulation of non-material things, such as more self-improvement or more experience
- she criticises this lifestyle as not being an option for people who can barely make a living
today's minimalism
2.
- the article "The Pitfalls and the Potential of the new minimalism" begins with a headline and leads to the topic with an introductory sentence
- the article is divided into six parts
- the author uses different stylistic devices in each section
Introduction:
structure of the article
structure of the article
- use of religious vocabulary throughout the text "minimalist gospel" (l. 9), "whirling dervish" (l. 23), "converts" (l. 28) and "minimal monastery" (l. 49)
- minimalism is seen by the author as a cult
- in the first part of the article, almost only enumerations (lines 1-8) of a minimalistic lifestyle
- lines 5-8 consist of a large number of short main sentences
- by using imperatives, the reader is asked to follow this advice to live more minimally and shows what is meant by "stressful advice" in line 1
Main Part:
language and linguistic devices:
Part 1
language and linguistic devices:
Part 1
- the author then points to her expertise by naming well-known minimalists and their means of making themselves heard (e.g. Marie Kondo. (l. 9), Joshua Fields Millburn and Ryan Nicodemus (l. 13))
Part 2
- with the parable "As I waded through this I felt like a dirty sponge being irradiated in the microwave" (l. 19) Tolentino introduces the third section
- conveys to the reader how difficult the start towards a Minimalist lifestyle is
- using symbols like e.g. "cleansing fire" (l. 20), Tolentino underlines the feelings that were raging inside her while she was dealing with the topic
- by using the neologism "Kondoed" (l. 20), a metaphor in l. 21 and informal language in l. 24 "doodads", the author shows the depth to which she has dealt with the topic
- through visual emphasis such as the italicisation of certain words e.g. "You get rid of the things you don't need so that you can focus on the things you do !" (l. 26-27) she directs the focus on certain things
Part 3
- Tolentino then goes into the historical development of minimalism
insights from Elgin and Mitchell as well as mentions many facts and figures
- it strengthens her credibility and shows that the concept of minimalism has failed
Part 4
- largest single section from lines 40 - 67
- thematising the contrast between minimalism due to poverty referring to it as "humiliating and destructive" (l. 41) and as a sign of success "aspirational and deluxe way of life" (l. 45)
- Tolentino uses pejorative and negative vocabulary e.g. "self-centred", "competitive" (l. 52); "acquisitive attitude" (l. 53); "frivolous possessions" (l. 56/57) to emphasise that she does not approve of a certain kind of minimalism
- this criticism applies especially to the minimalists mentioned at the beginning, who used statements such as "the left hand might declutter while the right hand buys a seventy-five-dollar rose-quartz tuning fork" (l. 63/64)
- Tolentino concludes the article with the help of parallelism
- for this, she uses the quote "more time, more passion, more experiences, more growth, more contribution, more contentment - and more freedom" to illustrate one last time her critical view of the topic
Part 5
3.1
- happiness is not in things, but in yourself; Less is more
are the guiding principles of minimalism
- however, it is questionable what one should have less of and whether this makes one happy, as minimalism promises
Introduction
- if you take Tolentino's advice, for example, that you should take every object in your hand and consider whether it brings you happiness or not, it sounds plausible at first glance and not very difficult to implement
- but if you think about it more carefully, you quickly realise that this advice is not very easy to implement in all areas of life
- you can't just throw away everything you don't enjoy
- students, according to this suggestion, could throw away their homework or employees their work documents
- in fact, this would lead to more time and freedom
- even if that sounds very nice at first, that is certainly not the intention behind minimalism
- besides, if you want to have a certain freedom in life, for example, to choose your university of choice or to live in a nice house, you have to work for it, even if it doesn't always make you happy
- in my opinion, some things are easier to implement, and others require more effort
- for example, packing everything away to see if you still need it after a month or not would be quite tedious
- but decluttering every now and then is a good idea
- there are some points on which I agree with minimalists
e.g. that you have to clean out and get rid of old things now and then
- however, I don't think I would have more freedom or time if I radically reduced my possessions, but it would give me more space, which would be beneficial
- the advice of the minimalists that you should never buy anything on sale, however, is a bit extreme in my opinion, and I can't agree with it
- of course, you shouldn't buy for the sake of buying, but many people don't have a lot of money, for example and are dependent on special offers
Main Part
- of course, it always depends on one's living situation how easy it is to implement the advice of the minimalists
- in the end, I think that many of the minimalists' tips are easy to implement and that some things should be taken into account
- for a student with only one room, for example, it is easier to clear out than for an adult living in a house
Conclusion
3.2
- from the Indian author Amit Rays, there is the following quote "In every crisis, doubt or confusion, take the higher path - the path of compassion, courage, understanding and love"
- with this quote, he says that
- one should stand up for one's ideal
- not to lose sight of the greater good and the needs of others
- the best example is the current Covid-19 crisis, which has been affecting people in all walks of life for almost two years
- people are coping with this situation in many different ways
- in the following text, I will show why Ray's advice is good but not easy to implement
Introduction
- Example: the current Covid-19 crisis
- initial confusion, doubt and uncertainty in the population
unawareness about the virus, effects or origin
- continued ignorance and uncertainty among the population about whether the government's security measures are effective, helpful and appropriate at all
- the question of when the crisis will be over and what consequences can be expected for children, families, students, or even the economy is coming more and more to the fore
- especially on security measures, there are different opinions within the population
- partly there is ignorance (people do not follow measures)
- in part, the measures are followed absolutely
- others are torn apart
- during the crisis, we often saw more arguments about things like the usefulness of a mask or other measures
- in times like these, the population should stick together and respect the opinions of others, no matter what they are
- it is important that in such times of uncertainty, we show compassion and understanding for those who are afraid
- at the same time, to stand up for what we believe in, without considering others with different opinions as enemies
Main Part
- in my opinion, Amit Rays is right with his quote
- even if it is admittedly not always easy to follow this advice because the crisis has been going on for so long
- sometimes, people like to agree with a quote on paper but act contrary in real life
- all in all, everyone should think about their actions from time to time, and if you realise that you are acting selfishly or rashly, try to follow Ray's advice
Conclusion