Task 2
Working on the text
Do the following tasks, writing coherent texts. Use your own words as far as appropriate.
(28 BE)
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Summarize the information on Dr Laing.
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Analyze the way the author creates atmosphere in this excerpt.
Writing
Choose one of the following tasks:
(32 BE)
3.1
Using the extracts a starting point, assess the implications of living amongst a “homogeneous collection of [...] people”.
or
3.2
You are working on an international youth project on urban life. Write a blog entry for the project website, commenting on the statement below.
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Thompson Adams, Trisha (2012). Dec. 22. In 366 Sketchbook.
Extract from the novel "High-Rise"
The action is set in London in the 1970s.
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While preparing breakfast soon after eleven o'clock one Saturday morning three months earlier,
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Dr Laing was startled by an explosion on the balcony outside his living-room. A bottle of
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sparkling wine had fallen from a floor fifty feet above, ricocheted off an awning as it hurtled
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downwards, and burst across the tiled balcony floor.
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The living-room carpet was speckled with foam and broken glass. Laing stood in his bare feet
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among the sharp fragments, watching the agitated wine seethe across the cracked tiles. High
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above him, on the 31st floor, a party was in progress. He could hear the sounds of deliberately
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over-animated chatter [ ... ]. Needless to say no one at the party was in the least concerned about
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the ultimate destination of this missile - but as Laing had already discovered, people in high-
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rises tended not to care about tenants more than two floors below them.
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Trying to identify the apartment, Laing stepped across the spreading pool of cold froth. Sitting
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there, he might easily have found himself with the longest hangover in the world. He leaned out
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over the rail and peered up at the face of the building, carefully counting the balconies. As
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usual, though, the dimensions of the forty-storey block made his head reel. Lowering his eyes
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to the tiled floor, he steadied himself against the door pillar. The immense volume of open space
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that separated the building from the neighbouring high-rise a quarter of a mile away unsettled
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his sense of balance. At times he felt that he was living in the gondola of a ferris wheel
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permanently suspended three hundred feet above the ground.
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None the less, Laing was still exhilarated by the high-rise, one of five identical units in the
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development project and the first to be completed and occupied. Together they were set in a
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mile-square area of abandoned dockland and warehousing along the north bank of the river.
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The five high-rises stood on the eastern perimeter of the project, looking out across an
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ornamental lake - at present an empty concrete basin surrounded by parking-lots and
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construction equipment. On the opposite shore stood the recently completed concert-hall, with
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Laing's medical school and the new television studios on either side. The massive scale of the
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glass and concrete architecture, and its striking situation on a bend of the river, sharply
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separated the development project from the rundown areas around it, decaying nineteenth century
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terraced houses and empty factories already zoned for reclamation. [ ... ]
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For all its size, the high-rise contained an impressive range of services. The entire 10th floor
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was given over to a wide concourse, as large as an aircraft carrier's flight-deck, which contained
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a supermarket, bank and hairdressing salon, a swimming-pool and gymnasium, a well-stocked
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liquor store and a junior school for the few young children in the block. High above Laing, on
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the 35th floor, was a second, smaller swimming-pool, a sauna and a restaurant. Delighted by
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this glut of conveniences, Laing made less and less effort to leave the building. [ ... ]
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The apartment had been expensive, its studio living-room and single bedroom, kitchen and
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bathroom dovetailed into each other to minimize space and eliminate internal corridors. To his
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sister Alice Frobisher, who lived with her publisher husband in a larger apartment three floors
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below, Laing had remarked, 'The architect must have spent his formative years in a space
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capsule – I'm surprised the walls don't curve ... '
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At first Laing found something alienating about the concrete landscape of the project - an
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architecture designed for war, on the unconscious level if no other. After all the tensions of his
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divorce, the last thing he wanted to look out on each morning was a row of concrete bunkers.
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However, Alice soon convinced him of the intangible appeal of life in a luxury high-rise. Seven
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years older than Laing, she made a shrewd assessment of her brother's needs in the months after
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his divorce. She stressed the efficiency of the building's services, the total privacy. 'You could
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be alone here, in an empty building - think of that, Robert.' She added, illogically, 'Besides,
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it's full of the kind of people you ought to meet.'
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Here she was making a point that had not escaped Laing during his inspection visits. The two
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thousand tenants formed a virtually homogeneous collection of well-to-do professional people
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– lawyers, doctors, tax consultants, senior academics and advertising executives, along with a
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smaller group of airline pilots, film-industry technicians and trios of air-hostesses sharing
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apartments. By the usual financial and educational yardsticks they were probably closer to each
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other than the members of any conceivable social mix, with the same tastes and attitudes, fads
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and styles - clearly reflected in the choice of automobiles in the parking-lots that surrounded
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the high-rise, in the elegant but somehow standardized way in which they furnished their
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apartments, in the selection of sophisticated foods in the supermarket delicatessen, in the tones
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of their self-confident voices. In short, they constituted the perfect background into which Laing
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could merge invisibly. His sister's excited vision of Laing alone in an empty building was closer
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to the truth than she realized. The high-rise was a huge machine designed to serve, not the
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collective body of tenants, but the individual resident in isolation. Its staff of air-conditioning
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conduits, elevators, garbage-disposal chutes and electrical switching systems provided a neverfailing
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supply of care and attention that a century earlier would have needed an army of tireless
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servants. Besides all this, once Laing had been appointed senior lecturer in physiology at the
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new medical school, the purchase of an apartment nearby made sense. lt helped him as well to
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postpone once again any decision to give up teaching and take up general practice. But as he
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told himself, he was still waiting for his real patients to appear – perhaps he would find them
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here in the high-rise? Rationalizing his doubts over the cost of the apartment, Laing signed a
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ninety-nine-year lease and moved into his one-thousandth share of the cliff face.
Ballard, J. G: High-Rise. London: Fourth Estate, 1975, pp. 2 – 7
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Our solutions are listed in bullet points. In the examination, full marks can only be achieved by writing a continuous text.
Our solutions are listed in bullet points. In the examination, full marks can only be achieved by writing a continuous text.
1.
The extract of the novel "High-Rise" by J.G. Ballard, published by Fourth Estate in London in 1979, is about the insight into the life of a senior lecturer of physiology living in a luxury high-rise building.
Introduction
- the main character is a lecturer in physiology who teaches in a nearby medical school
- he is divorced, well-off and lives now alone in a high-rise, which he likes a lot
- he has a sister, who convinced him of living in the high-rise and lives in the same builing
- since the building offers almost everything, he rarely leaves it
- he avoids making decisions about his future - like to give up teaching and open a general practice
- has doubts about the high rent of the flat, yet he has signed a ninety-nine year tenancy agreement
Main Body
2.
- "five-high rises stood on ... looking out" (l. 22) - use of personification to highlight the dimension of the high-rises and to make the description more vivid
- "... living in a gondola of a ferris wheel" (l. 17) and "huge machine designed to serve" (l. 59) - use of a metaphor to emphasize the discomfort, tension and a negative and anonymous atmosphere
- "... as large as an aircraft carrier's flight-deck..." (l. 30) - comparison is used to highlight the immense size of the high-rise
- "a supermarket, bank and hairdressing salon, a swimming-pool and gymnasium ..." (l. 31 - 32) - the enumeration is futhermore used to underline the size but also the isolation of the building's residents, as the large range of services suggests that residents no longer even need to leave the building for shopping or other activities
- metaphorical terms from the realm of war "...architecture designed for war,..." (l. 40/41), "... an army of tireless servants." (l. 62/63) are used to describe the rather coldness of the building and isolated atmosphere
- choice of words that suggests an atmosphere of anonymity and loneliness "... Laing could merge invisibly" (l. 57/58), "... people in high-rises tended not to care about tenants ..." (l. 9/10), "...but the individual resident in isolation." (l. 59/60) and creates a sense of alienation and despair
- choice of words that suggests that the construction of the buildings is uninviting and desolate "...miles of abandoned docks and warehouses..." (l. 21), "concrete landscape of the project.... " (l. 40/41)
Main Body
Linguistic devices
Linguistic devices
- in conclusion, can be said that the atmosphere is one of desolation, loneliness and isolation through the significant and rather negative choice of words and comparisons
- the other stylistic devices used underline the rather negative atmosphere
Conclusion
3.1
“homogeneous collection of [...] people”.
- the common ground of groups could be
- origin, social status, age
- behavior, interests, way of living
- values they behave to, people's believes
Main Body
Characteristics homogeneous groups in general
Characteristics homogeneous groups in general
- the people who live in the high-rise with Mr Laing are like him
- educated
- affluent
- successful in a profession with very good wages "...doctors, lawyers, tax consultants, senior academics..." (l. 50/51)
- his sister thinks that this fact could be advantageous for Laing "...kind of people you ought to meet." (l.46/47)
Referring to the excerpt
- in a homogeneous group, you get a sense of belonging
- it's a comfortable feeling
- possibly fewer conflicts arise
- a sense of understanding can be conveyed
Possible positive effects of living in a homogeneous group
- discrimination or exclusion of "others" who do not fit into the pattern
- little diversity results in little input or impulses for thought
- no intellectual, creative, or cultural input from the outside world
- there can be no broadening of horizons
Possible negative effects of living in a homogeneous group
- all in all, it can be summarized that a homogeneous group can certainly offer a comforting feeling of belonging and security
- however, among like-minded people, no new intellectual or cultural insights can be found or personal growth pursued
Conclusion
3.2
- Dear Readers,
According to Trisha Thompson Adams, anonymity in a big city makes it easier for people to remember who they really are. The crucial question, however, is whether anonymity actually has the stated effect or what other effects it might lead to. I my opinion there are positive as well as negative effects on the subject.
Introduction
- the anonymity of a big city gives you the freedom and flexibility to reinvent yourself, try new things or explore your true self
- the development of the personality, as well as the self-discovery, are initiated and encouraged
- the danger of peer pressure or social control is reduced, and thus the realization of the independence better possible
- better protection of privacy is achievable and thus reduces the risk of privacy violation
- diversity in large cities allows individuals to realize their personality without encountering rejection
Main Body
positive Aspects
positive Aspects
- anonymity could lead to alienation from society
- "no one knows me" could implicate a form of isolation and usually leads to loneliness and a lack of a sense of belonging
- the anonymity in a big city with few social ties and loose family structures could lead to instability and an absence of support and solidarity
harmful/negative Aspects
- all in all, are there different types of effects on one's personality while living in big cities
- what kind of effect the anonymity of a big city on the individual has, depends on one's character
- however, what mustn't be forgotten is, that despite all freedom and independence the anonymity of big cities offer, social contact is as necessary are as the personal realization
- people need social ties, stability, and support from confidants
- in my opinion, when you surround yourself with the right people, you still get the freedom to discover and express your individual self
Conclusion